SaithKalen

Hi, author here who will shamelessly give herself a review with flying colours. Why? Because I believe in my own works. Anyway, what I’m trying to say is this book is worth reading and spending some coins, okay? You don’t believe me? Then how about adding it to your library, reading and continuing to read by unlocking chapters? I’ll make it all worth it so trust me on this. Will ’ya please? (⑅•ᴗ•⑅)

Ah, yes! Thank you for informing me. My mind might have been afloat when I wrote this part to add it on the strength rather than the intelligence as what I had stated. I'll edit that out, thank you again!

Thank you. Same to you and your novel. It’s really great especially if you would apply the advices on your book reviews.

I also notice that maybe because I am narrating so much that until the very latest chapter including the one on my draft was still in the same day, haha. But thank you for the review!

Hello again! I already posted my review. BTW, I really like your book so keep up the good work! Please give some time to read mine before giving a review. I will really appreciate an honest review!

First of all, I like your writing style. Your English is very fluent, which I find professional and at the same time popular with the masses. It has the same vibe as those books that are published as physical copies. The only problem is that, when writing the dialogue parts, it became confusing, especially on the latter chapters. It is an important part in writing narrative stories to put a dialogue tag to make it easier for the reader to know who was speaking. Although I advice not to put it on every dialogue. I can't give a perfect score for updating stability because this was just a newly published book that is free to read so we, the readers, don't have the right to obligate the author to update regularly. I, myself, am an author so I can relate to you in this regard. I gave three stars for the story development for the same reason. This was just the beginning and you only have a few prepared chapters, but despite that, there were already some developments in the timeline, although they weren't that big. A key development was already provided, which is why it's got a three-star rating. What I commend the most in your story is how you build your character. It was just the beginning but there are many important details about the character and how he might have grown as the story developed further. Lastly, the way you built the world background was fascinating, in my opinion. You didn't give everything in one go but it didn't lack details either. Just enough information about the world was provided that gives the basic details and also provides bait for the readers to read more to know the world more. Maybe the little problem is how you narrated it so others might find it confusing. Overall, this book is good. It has a nice touch, although not unique in terms of genre or the chosen trope but it's own way of interpretation, so its better. And it'll be greater if the author is able to maintain the mentioned advantages and apply the disadvantages I have provided. Just be consistent in your chosen writing styles and follow through on your story plot. Good job!

Sure, I’ll visit it later. Thank you for the time.

Ah, thank you so much! Now I’m motivated to finished and publish another chap ＼(´ ∇`)ノ

Thank you so much for the review! And thank you for appreciating my book. As for social medias, I am not active in them but I will try to reply once I’ve notice any message from you. You can find them in my account profile. Thank you!

This book is really good and interesting. Please don’t drop this author🥺 I really love it🙏🥰