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PredatorDA2001

PredatorDA2001

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2019-12-12 加入United Kingdom
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  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20012 years ago
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    A great plot ans story enjoying Lot just couple thing that the author does with the main character which annoys me everything. Is comparing himself to naruto and sauke calling then stupid. obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20012 years ago
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    obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20012 years ago
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    hope your exams went well and if your still studying then good luck with the exams, continue with the work when it's possible for u have enjoyed, hope u dot drop it

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20012 years ago
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    really enjoyed so far pls carry on if possible when u get new ideas.. The story so far 👍 If possible don't drop can be one of the lasting Haikyuu novels out.

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20012 years ago
    回復 Clown_Of_God

    hopefully u continue with this, enjoyed so far

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20013 years ago
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    So far i have enjoyed the story hope u dont drop this fanfic novel and continue....................................................................................

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20013 years ago
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    Love it already, I read 3 different versions of the novel and this one was the best one so far as well as for in the kpop genre aswell for me at least. Hope u don't drop this and continue with the story with more updates if are able to. I'll try to vote 2 power stone every day to this novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20013 years ago
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    I just believ the chapterr was rushed, I'm enjoying it so far but he still Should check the details of the contract, he was still in his mid twenties and should now how these types of companies behave depending on his previous music career from his past life, from my perspective u should at least make more detailed then rushing the chapter, my guy met the the women for less then 30min and straight away just gave his life away to to company, I know that this is my opnion but just giving parts u can improve on. just try not to rush the important details of the story

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20013 years ago
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    Author u have done a good translation even they still needs work, I have read both of your translated versions and also the Chinese version and it Is another better. I'm just going to say that if u can for both series your translating if u are able to improve the story and make it non racist, such as the other work I have read up to liek 600chaps and my guy is a full hard on racist to everyone who's not a chinese, he goes to kill everyone that says something bad about China even its something small the same goes for the this current work aswell, it's a good novel but the author it just 100racist so if u can just improve that section of the novel, it will be great but you are doing a great job anyway

  • PredatorDA2001
    PredatorDA20013 years ago
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    no suppport, or resources, my guy is hallunicating