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Tev_1996a year ago發表thanks for the chapyer
- Tev_1996a year ago發表
Hey author thanks for the chapter, also... I noticed that you tend to repeat yourself quite a bit, it's fine if happens once every chapter but when it happens multiple times in a chapter it can get kinda annoying, just something to think about, I love the story regardless.
- Tev_19962 years ago發表
50 chapters in and it's an enjoyable read so far, there's a nice balance of screen time for both the MC and side/support characters, which brings the novel to life (hopefully it stays that way), give it 10 chapters before dropping it.
- Tev_19963 years ago發表
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
- Tev_19963 years ago發表
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
- Tev_19964 years ago回復 Daoist6W3ukx
Mandy was gossiping about Remain and phoebe, also she was going to talk about her first time getting physical with Remain, so remain used telepathy to get the wolfcats to howl to stop Mandy from gossiping which worked.
該章已被刪除。 - Tev_19964 years ago發表
4 chapters in 1 week, nice, Thxs for the chapter
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