Len_Stoff

It's already getting boring, enough meaningless monologues in each chapter, almost half of the chapters are just mc monologues, and all the attention should be on mc and not others, everyone around mc is just npc, they are not very important

From the outside, it is clear that as soon as he came to power, the clans of senju, uzumaki, and uchiha immediately disappeared, This is only what was known from the anime and manga, but in reality, thousands of geniuses of all clans and ordinary people were killed, if you remove zetsu, then half of the problems will be the world because of danzo and sarutobi that allows him to exist

Nerf mc for the sake of the plot, suddenly they somehow ended up on ships and no one noticed it, this fruit doesn't let you hide from haki it's not so op,

I wouldn't want imu to be overpriced so much, he can't be stronger than yonko or gorosei, in Chinese fanfiction imu op at cultivator level, in reality he should be strong not invincible

Chinese mc, I should have left just the hanma pedigree

To be honest, I was waiting for him to fuck in the rin nohara tent, no matter how bad it sounded

I'm now reading the original fanfiction in Chinese, there mc is still a child and starts cosplaying obito, he does everything the same, so it's just au, that is, the plot will not change but everyone pretends that everything is different

"It is better to die for the emperor than to live for yourself"

If tsunade becomes hokage, then it makes no sense to leave anymore, but minato lacks a little muscle like jojo or demon slayer

I don't like the age of mc and the time when he was born, in the original he is apparently even younger than minato, the timeline is dead here, in fact, I wanted him to be scarier and not forever a child, unlike the original where mito uzumaki is just a bitch Konoha to get angry at any refusal in the Chinese version there was no such thing, but in principle so far I like the only wish is that mc is not a child, but an adult/teenager (Google translete)