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Eriri plus having Yue on top of that? You have me bagged. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

the story hooked me in, now I am curious. You said that the idea came from a japanese novel, what book is that?

woahhh mass release, thank you!!!!

Best ATG Fanfic. Absolutely the BEST! No doubt about it. My fav ATG fic.

Goodluck!! Hope you can upload again later on!

The writing quality is absolutely great. I can't stress enough just how good the writing quality is. The author was also able to easily bring out emotions of the characters and convey it to the readers. I really teared up in some of the emotional parts of the story. Though the plot is ok and could have some improvements, but if the author is able to do this and combine it with this quality of writing, I have no doubts you would succeed.

This great! but if you plan on adding later on then please dont make it tooo big. That will ruin and take away screentime for Sera and Sona.

Great start!! I love the interactions between them! Hope you can continue this, and you can have all my power stones.