Golden_Red_Fox

Honestly, the story is doing great and a situation with the avenger well not ideal is good for him and his situation. Love interest wise X 23 is a good first love interest having a second one or third one would be OK as well, but I would suggest that if any of them come from the avatar verse, they be from the second generation or once we do not know the end of their story.

Yes, but like most translated Pokémon novels their inconsistencies and repeats throughout the story

Oll I love this book it always gets a laugh out of me.

So is the story dead?

What is the update schedule for this one? I like it and I see a lot of potential in it.

What is the update schedule/ status for this story

Tftc

You made the same mistake here as well

You accidentally replaced chinchou with its evolved form lantern throughout this entire chapter

OK, why hasn’t she been teleporting? She did that briefly once. Or at least it was implied in the previous chapters. But here she got caught without even trying she could’ve totally gotten away from the gym leader.