Sapphire_Ace
I'm an author who has many stories but will only post ones i'm updating consistently for now,
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Sapphire_Ace2 years ago回復 Ninestar619_5803right I saw that you can add characters on here
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago回復 Fallen_Pages
honestly I've edited this thing so many times over the years and it's just little things like that I need another set of eyes for!
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago回復 Ninestar619_5803
oh okay 👌 one person mentioned I repeated the same words a lot 🥴
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago回復 Fallen_Pages
Which words were repeated where exactly, that would be helpful to know.
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago發表
The story has very vivid imagery, is a decent story about reincarnation and Gods
該書已被刪除。 - Sapphire_Ace2 years ago發表
wow 😂
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago發表
Hello Author,The book is super intriguing. I am enjoying reading it! Anyways, my minor criticisms were, the name of the story is kind of less catchy or interesting, and another thing was that I cannot exactly tell what your characters look like.
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago發表
was he imprisoned for being an emperor they wanted to overthrow
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago回復 Ninestar619_5803
thank you, any criticisms? that would be super helpful
- Sapphire_Ace2 years ago發表
Hey so I was having difficulty reading this as it needs to be edited for some flow issues. You need to fix some of the grammar, the sentences tend to flow together. The quotations are confusing the way they are written too.
