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Solid as far as fanfics on webnovel go. But that doesn't mean it doesn't have its own problems. The first is that the pacing is not ideal, the whole story and deliverance drags. Another is that most of the plot points just come across as not very well thought out and cliche, more so in an idea drivel kinda way. But compared to most on this website, at least in the fanfiction section this is a very solid entry, especially for Daimachi.
Give me some time, I started this on the fly. I need some time to plan things out. Will probably start posting again soon.
I mean I could. I hundred percent could. But the question is am I going to?
It is but I'm leaning towards the MC being more of an average joe. Not somebody who would just swim through this new world.
Thanks, though I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks like this. I was just as bad my first watch through, it's only on repeat viewings that I paid attention to the details.
Probably better than what I was thinking tbh.
Lol, do you have powers or something? I just went to check which paragraph you meant and it says the paragraph is deleted.
I think it makes enough sense, but if that's how you feel, then fair enough.