Honest_critic1980

I like to say this first, it all similar to a manga I read, but there is some big difference. there story isn't as heavy Harlem orientated (which I appreciate ) and there seem to be a lot more interesting side characters . it easy to read the story, story flows very nice and smooth. I find the lack of description of area and other characters sad. everything else I enjoy the free chapters . if this get finish and webnovels decided to sell books whole, and really might consider buying.

I would give this, this story a solid 4 if there wasn't a few thing that disagree with me. one was lack of or not enough environment description. I get the bare bone in the details. characters beside the mc feel shallow. and the Mc gives a saint feel. no characters flaw seen yet. ( my flaw is I only read the free chapters )

this is a good story. there is already a manga if thus story already out there. and the light novel is already posted chapter way ahead. still I enjoy the story

I did what you ask but it's seem it be awhile before we get to your goal. which is sad for me cause It seem the last update is 3 month ago..... can you try smaller goals please like 5 more subscriber or something . pleases

I love the build up and tension. the self reflection, another reborn person, twist in the story, and the cliffhanger ending of this chapter . I can't wait to see a update.

I just finished all four chapters. I can't wait for more

if your not a big fan of league of legends and Warhammer 40K, you will have a hard time following the story. Example im a big fan of 40k but barly know anything about league's of legend. it seem the author expect you to know all the more of both worlds and fill in the blanks. it goes into a fast pace, but leave a lot unanswer. I like the idea of the story, creating space marine base on league of legend hero's. but it has to be done right. put in the time to at least do a basic description of characters or else it just a confusing mess which just frustrates the reader.

I gladly recommend this story. a different yet well thought out story. dialogue was smooth and transition from fighting was cool. Only down side was the 30 limit on free chapters to read

instead of Sutter I meant Author

how much does the Sutter make and what's the cut this platform take?