John_Annex

I got to ch. 10, but I can't continue. I like the idea of the story but you've took way to much influence from bad hentai with the "ahegao face" and humiliating language like " cum dump toilet", like if I was 14, that would be cool, but since I'm not and I find it not just cringe but it also kills the immersion.

Review as of Chapter 325 So this story is about a guy who can consume beast meat (later corpses in general)to get attributes points so he can make himself stronger, the problem I have with it is, his cheat is just boring and it hasn't got anymore functions even after 300 chapters, like if he could use the points on other people to help them it would've made it way more interesting. Character design is kinda meh as well,like none of the chars are even remotely that deep and there's almost no char development. Translation is fine if you've read a few MTL's before, if not then you might struggle to understand some parts. While it is a harem somewhat but, he's only slept with 2 when I stopped reading, and the harem isn't important or the focus of the story.

Nice, I was on the fence about reading it but since it's a harem I'll give it a try.

I actually went back and re-read it, and you're right, my bad,I guess I just misread it so thanks for catching that.

Thanks for the review because that sounds awful.

Managed to get to ch.40 before I had to just stop, the MC is just not that interesting at all and his personality is just flat, the units he recruits are murlocs, nagas,and sea pixies and are just about as uninteresting as it gets, when he recruited his first hero unit I thought there might be some actually dialogue but nope, she says less than 15 words in 20 chapters.

This might be the worse "goes back in time/reborn" stories I've ever read. So in the first 20 chapters he dies, goes back in time 5 years Restarts the VR game he was playing and in the first couple hours makes an enemy of the guild that controls 95% of the starting village he spawns in, then he proceeds to run like the little idiot he is and even starts throwing money at people chasing him to bribe them and is shocked when they just pick the money up and continue to chase him, eventually he gets away and logs out. Then forces some kinda nonsense that involve him moving his family to a new house that cost 16M but he can only pay 600k and after all that he logs back in and is still freaking level 1 at ch.20.

Well that's unfortunate because the rest looks pretty interesting but I prefer harem stories.

Oh really? I was thinking of passing but if there's a harem, I think I'll give it a try.

I stopped at ch..337 here's my thoughts: Pros: 1.Good variety of different types/races of women 2.Love the dialogue between chars, 3.R-18 scenes are pretty well done.( kinda wished you'd had more group scenes though,I only remember 2 up till I quit) 4.The general interaction between chars is really well done. Cons: 1.time moves way to slow, like at ch.240 barely a week has passed since ch.1 2.Some of the earlier women like Penny, O'lee, and Gwenth seem to just been forgotten. 3. most of his family (all but his "mother") are just annoying to outright awful chars, the "guides" and Winds Of Change and almost as bad. 4.The whole thing with Virgo/Sage/MC kink was just unnecessary and the Cancer/Scorpio/MC was even worse. What finally got me to just stop was you talking about turning Fate and Murphy (both males) to females so they can go with him to the harem planet and just move in, like you'd been better off and just going all in and making all chars but the MC female, instead you got several males gods that can watch the MC at any given time no matter what he's doing or who he's with.