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let him cook bro. Don't mess with the sauce.

Minato is the cook brah. Kushina would poison you. He's both hokage and househusband. Dude can do it all.

i hope you're feeling better

This story was one of the most fun i've read in a long time. I liked how he's an actual hero that's op and yet has too many fatal flaws, one being selflessness, another being love, and another his humanity. It's amazing because I was like damn, he's in pain and there was even more pain but it was all worth it. We saw him as untouchable and you broke him, as an author should. I can't wait to see his development. You ended on quite a cliffhanger. The updates are great. The world is growing. You write pretty well and you seem to know a lot about the world. It shows in your work. Please just don't make him a shirou emiya or a peter parker. I hope that when you finish this story, however long that may be, that he is happy. Though, if that isn't your intention then forget about what I just said. This is an amazing story and I can't wait for more from you. P.s. The mom shit after arty was a stroke of evil genius. You destroyed his invincibility. Can't wait to see what he'll do now and good luck.

beautiful

this is interesting. I'm just wondering how long this is taking. don't you have to save thalia before she becomes a tree? All this could be done after or left to his sis. I might be wrong.

I want to say that this fanfic has made me very happy. My nigga is getting that geralt of rivia treatment for being a pervert even though he is a changed man. Consequences. I love how his death actually affected him unlike many other fics that I will not name. I also like that while the gamer aspect is important, characters are also being developed. Obviously, I would like rias to grow stronger and stuff. She has potential. Maybe you could take a page from the gamer manhwa and let her party with him. It would be cool to see a more developed rias rather than the princess in the castle we got. Wow though, you've impressed me.

this is fun