Piercing_Sky

I had to give a 4.8 because the only characters we really interact with are the slip slime and Alaric. I hope that you'll introduce more characters soon. This book is really high quality please keep updating!

Ch. 43 has rape scene, ejaculates inside of Bulma despite Bulma saying not to. No prior warning of this in desc or tags, Bulma not even angry.

the difference is that our protagonist speaks in "gyaa"

He wouldn't, but Saibamen would probably be generalized as such.

Horrible mindset ☠️ mfer crippled his eye, he just annoyed you.

sadly this sorta thing is my pet peeve gr8 writing but im dropping here

"Family jewels" "marigold roger" One Piece fan detected.

Because this sentence has already been said 1,000,000 times. We, the readers, are not that stupid. The author doesn't seem to know how to show and not tell. Even then, it's literally a perfectly normal, everyday conversation. Why must the author deepen it in order to show off the protagonist's edge?

that... was not what happened lol.

it was too long for a single paragraph. most ppl here to kill time not to comprehend essays