kuronekochan2000

Let her enjoy the feeling of being chased for once ;)

Please proofread and edit the chapters. I couldn’t read any further because of the extensive grammatical and punctuation errors which distract from the story - most distracting of all to me were the constant switching between present and past tense, and unrealistic speech.

I unfortunately had to drop this book because there were so many grammatical errors which kept pulling my focus away from the actual story every time. I found it really difficult to immerse in the story because of this. I would highly recommend getting an editor, especially because I see that I’m not the only one who is bothered by this problem.

Disgusting story. ML’s blatant disrespect to FL is unredeemable. FL is weak and idiotic. No incentive to spend anything on this book so the story did not keep me past the unlocked chapters.

Yeah I think this is what the author means. Thanks for that :D

Only in novels is this not an invitation to get sued later

Whoa sometimes more people can come later. Calm downnnnn

Ok not gonna lie - I’m really becoming a fan of this Richard 😂😂

YES MUMMY VIVIAN 🙌🏼🙌🏼

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww