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Around chapter 20 or something, some sentences have words that are written backwards or wrong like this. "Wusiw fusiwie shsjwiw akzooaowls zmjsjs wodoe lspspw" This is just an example but it seems author hasn't fixed it at all.

What's wrong with the typing of the sentence??

One thing that struck me and made me notice something I love about this novel are the characters introduced by the author. An example is Buolo, a beast master that doesn't know how to raise a child. This detail gives depth to a characters template and strucked a chord within me. The World building is good, author releases information about the world slowly. I've only read the free chapters so far but I like the novel. Please keep up the good work author!!

From the reviews I've read so far, it's a dropped novel and I almost payed for it, jeez lol. I actually liked this novel since the characters have depth in them and aren't lame and boring and soggy. Dont bother paying since it was dropped.

I instantly got bored when Kai revealed everything to Lucas Morningstar lol. I lost interest in the novel and just skimmed everything. Now this doesn't mean the novel wasn't good, the beginning was really well executed and I enjoyed it. The characters showed amazing personal depth and personality with their own thoughts and actions. The slow power ups and the MCs personal life and interactions with other characters I enjoyed reading but I mostly only cared about the fighting part lol. Good novel :)

Bro I'm still confused after reading all the free chapters lol what's the point of seeing people's combat power? And that star core is exceedingly weird. He can't contain spiritual energy in him and loses it in fights.

OMGGG I FORGOT ABOUT THIS NOVEL!!!! IT WAS SO FRICKEN GOOD!! IM AT THE PART WHERE THEY'RE TRANSPORTED TO A DIFFERENT PLANET CAUSE THEIR PLANET GOT DESTROYED.

This is very well thought out and written novel. It has a type of elegance in it that cultivation should have, despite the MC having a system the author takes his time to introduce the world and raise the MC's power. It is very similar to Old Cultivation Novels I first read like ISSTH at least it gives me that vibe. I very much enjoy reading this novel definitely a gem! Please consider reading it and slowly enjoying it, it may have a lot of details and the pacing is slow but it's worth the your time to read.

I like the concept introduced, this novel is more of a fun read to waste time, I enjoy reading his power ups and the power of seeing the future, it's basically similar to being given hints from similar novels. I've read similar novels like these and they are mostly really fun to read. I hope this novel finishes strongly and continues to release chapters. I'm willing to pay to read the other chapters.