crazy_turkey18

Yay!!

this feels like a calm before a storm

oh i like this chapter. the death jackals being pretty talkative is interesting and there's some sort of introduction to who is with them. cool

ho ho, digging her way to her doom i see. can't wait for that bloodshed

Honestly, I think as a reader, I could probably feel the dwindling down. But nonetheless, a story that i still follow rather closely. It's good, and it has potential in it. I hope for a conclusion with the story, nothing rushed, a good end. You she come so far, and the change in pace that you needed is a good move. I think as an author you have been doing well. (: Keep it up!

yes author you better run. that last line.....

*Fist pump in the air* scoreeeeeee

That was hellish

Following their minds is giving me motion sickness.

Brutal