Great_maid_Oni

It's starting to get interesting, with this frequency of posts I wonder if we'll have the animated part today

Thx for chap

ridiculous how hard this chapter was to read, please fix this punctuation urgently

The story is just beginning, I will refrain from doing any analysis at this time but I would like to leave more tips for the author. The text has quite glaring punctuation errors, many parts scream out for, at the very least and as an example, a more well thought out separation of paragraphs. This third-person writing is great for less experienced writers who are just learning, but try exploring other POVs when you feel confident, this greatly enriches the story. If you have difficulty making the text better punctuated and fluid, try using GPT, but don't become dependent on it, use it more as an aid. I'm looking forward to your progress, later I'll do another review talking more about the story

Is baby Jesus? child with a mysterious father, appeared out of nowhere in his mother's belly?

congratulations on 100 chapters, a great milestone achieved Thx for chap

Oh, damn, so rest assured, real life priorities first, I just wanted to get an estimate

any expectations for the next one?

No problem, it's good to know that you intend to do one, that you just need time

Well, you're alive and responding here, that's good, could you tell me if you intend to release chapters of this story soon or if you're still focusing on the others?