asaade9999

nahhh its a canon rehash,paul is just a minor side character he doesn't add much to the plot, everything is just the same the timeline the plot the characters, its just an edited canon rehash

useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash useless to read too much canon rehash

wow the amount of useless chapter in this fic is a lot, example chapter 2 is useless and it was just on hermione's pov and the ending of chapter 2 is just the same ending of chapter 1

there was on 69shu. and it was complete in there

trash the author likes to feel his mysterious even his works is mysterious that it comes out as a jumbled mess trash the author likes to feel his mysterious even his works is mysterious that it comes out as a jumbled mess

just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc

it's getting trash the amount of useless chapter is increasing and the arc is getting too long, those who should die is always getting save

boring 10 chapters of fighting the 5 kage prologue and the useless arc isn't even finished boring 10 chapters of fighting the 5 kage prologue and the useless arc isn't even finished

this is trash its just another canon rehash, the mc is a useless side character that doesn't add to the plot this is trash its just another canon rehash, the mc is a useless side character that doesn't add to the plot

an MC who doesn't know how to score even with a system, seriously what a useless MC and system, looks like the author doesn't know a single thing about basketball and his main focus is the useless slicecof life not the basketball plot, author should change the title to slice of life system with a little basketball