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biggest cap of the century

the op of the novel told the translator to stop cuz the op was selling the fanfic on a site (which is illegal due to copyright) the translation made a discord server if you show him proof of buying the FF he will send you the rest of the FF he translated

it's ok i guess but there is a higher quality translation named genshin impact sorry can't be there with you that's better in pretty much every way

“a few months” it's been almost a full year

already don't like this mc gonna give it 3 more chapters if it doesn't get any better ima just drop it

gonna make an actual review just to let you know tho i haven't read that far but form i saw the people act in completely unrealistic ways the MC is a complete weirdo and the writing quality is slightly above webnovel level which isn't really that impressive since most webnovel FF and novels are utter trash but ill give it the benefit of the doubt it might get better in latter chapters but for me the start is bad and it turns me away from reading the rest. note author improve the beginning the start of a novel Is the most important part its the first thing new readers see and if it's bad it doesn't matter how good it gets most people will not keep reading

also one of the last paragraphs where the MC says he will show his true power just doesn't really fit with the image of old man Yamamoto which is the main reason most people come to read this mc fighting doesn't really flow that well also when writing him releasing his shikai put it in a different font like bold or cursive or something else so we the readers can see the difference and know that this attack isn't like the other because rn it just feels the same as when the MC used any of his other attacks.

also the image of a teenager with Yamamoto powers doesn't really fit because everyone associates his power with at least middle aged Yamamoto or old Yamamoto so seeing a teenager use his powers feels kinda off.

the shikai release doesn't really have the impact i thought it the MC feels way to casual when he releases his shikai cuz he doesn't really know its strength also it feels kinda cheap that he can just unlock his shikai easily with points and not have a requirement it dampens the coolness factor when he uses it. and author dont let the MC get bankai using points it feels extremely cheap and it'll feel underwhelming if he gets bankai just from killing enemies for points when he barely mastered his shikai it'd be better if his zanpaktu had a spirit that he can communicate and fight so when he uses bankai it feels actually earned.