relife

The main character is not likeable. And the writing put me off. Not really easy to read.

Also I would advise you to focus the story around Flynn. Aiden is already OP and well perceived so it’s kinda boring because we would already expect him to be good while it’s interesting to know how Flynn will push back setbacks.

Well good story but the only problem that I have is the constant change of pov that is really confusing. You should really focus on a single character pov when both brothers are together at least.

Well I gave up the novel because too dark for me but I would say that it’s well written. For those who want a light hearted story maybe this is not for you.

Out of nowhere just like that 🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨

Maybe count again

Literally

Well 11 times 9 is 99 so I don’t understand what is wrong

So a loser

i heard it was fake