Revenge_Knightess

Relax it will come, I didnt say when in February did I?

I might write it.

You're right I changed it, must have slipped it.

None were taken, but that is exactly the point of the other story you are referring to, it's a snapshot of where we are at in her cycles, she doesn't know where it all started. As for this story, it's about Sarah, who is already in the other story, so why write a beginning for that again?

That would be a good point if the character used that particular ability before, but she didn't. Besides, if you write the character obtain flight do you immediately need to know how fast, how high? You learn the limitation of an ability when the character conveys that. Assuming something is good and all, but insisting on your assumptions against the person writing the story is nonsensical.

Yeah, unfortunately, that was a little gag. Having that in each chapter is a pain. But yes, she does receive such information from time to time in the future, but it's not mentioned.

They shouldn't be, as they are magi-based, magical energy constructs, but Kara herself does not fully understand these types of clones so far.

Sometimes it is, English is not my first language, more like fourth.

The Novel is AU. Things are not going to be the same. Even so it said Servant Artoria not Heroic Spirit Artoria.

dammit you're right, I guess that is what happens when you let ai adapt your writing style and you thoroughly read through it....I will be taking the whole thing offline and rewriting it.