Chickennick

Please don’t drop it again

This novel starts off with an interesting premise but it becomes unreadable after the first ten or so chapters. The main issue for me is that the author is unable to keep track of what’s going on in the story.

It took one day from being outmuscled to out dribbling all the opponents and scoring

Having studied German with his family he’s now proficient at spoken English. Please look that one over

This wouldn’t happen I get the author is Chinese but you don’t need to try so hard to glorify communism it’s really unrealistic

I think call of duty 19 is a joke but with this author I’m not sure

How do you go from a 2-2 tie to a 3-1 lead

Hopefully the non football parts of the story are better because there’s a way to make a character op and fun and then there is this

Spain got robbed there as well

This could be great if someone took the time to go over the grammar mistakes