EdMakuKusune

Glad I came back... Your storytelling when it comes to sad endings is top-notch! [img=recommend]

Amp?

Alayla, actually.

That recipe....pfft haha! I didn't write the whole ingredient! I'm sorry.

Hah? What?

LOL

First chap and it already has a goal. Very impressive.

FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!

THIS MAKES MY NOSE BLEED!!! In other words, this have a great MC.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Ok. There was originality and creativeness. Grammar seems a bit wrong on some cases. Characters are presented and described as the story goes on and I liked that. All in all your story is about to create a great future. Just don't stop till you finish it. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.