VonBritannia

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easily best invincible fanfic. Just story wise and progression easily top 10 fanfic on this site ever. story moves so slow. the characters feel so real. the story is not a rehash of cannon with an observer but a story of its own. keep it up man. really good so far

the story has not moved passed chapter 3. every chapter is just constantly repeating the same shit over and over again like bro move the goddammit plot forward. I've genually never been more frustrated reading something.

bro you are grinding yo story to a halt. you are progressing the story at all. like i know your tryna world build but your not really doing that. your just going in a circle.

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beserk would have been the best piece of fiction is the author finished it with a sweet or bittersweet ending before he died. griffen and the god hand dead at the hands of guts is all us beserk fans want even if guts dies to achieve it in the end. hope you give us a good ending that guts deserved man.

love this book so far. beserk is prob never gonna get its good ending so i hope you can give us that.

gc once my powerstone refresh ill come back and send some.

gc.