Blackcrust

To me this is one of the stories which have apparent and gigantic potential. The background is easy to digest, interesting synopsis, engaging hooks that let you wanna know more. And most importantly the simple language that helped me gulp two chapters in matter of 2 minutes. I like an easy and engaging read. Recommed to this every one who are into dark dystopian world where mc being tormented both mentally and physically and then rising to the top. I noticed a few word repetition and missing comma-splices but all that ought to get better with further chapter since the author already seem to have good grip over the their writing style and vocabulary. An easy 5 stars to the author.

i really wanna know what happens next.

intersting 👁️👁️

This is a very interesting novel. The kind of which is rare on this platform. This is the kind of narrative that cares about the intrinsic details of the content. Medical terms, geographical terms, and other facts give us the about research that went behind each chapter. The pacing of the story is good, along with the detailed backgrounds of the characters. And the delivery of the dialogues also blends well with the story. I no qualms about the writing quality since I couldn't find any errors. It's a great read and engages the readers. I would advise the author to shorten the paragraphs, to max 4 sentences per para. After 3 or 4 sentences many readers generally switch to the next one. (Just an advice but if you want to stick to your own way, that works too!) The setting of the story is good, and I think that author has done a very good job in presenting the concept of past-life and memories of the past. Very enjoyable work will keep going to find how the story unfolds. Good luck to author