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You yapped too much, sir
The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly
I forgot to check my notes when I got back home, so it's a bit late, but it's 5000 years for a Heaven Mage, 2000 for Earth Mages, etc.
They progressively gain more lifespan. IIRC Heaven Mages can live for a thousand years
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
I bet he will turn out to be a Soul Accumulation already
This chapter is the best
Ning Yan got pregnant...