n7harry

we read, we finish. We read again!

excuses, excuses, and more excuses. Winston should have suffered more. he could have postponed his plans, grew more stronger. life needs satisfaction, and Winston should have sang through depth of his bones and soul for the whole of aris, for a century atleast!

I am still fuming that Winston and his son has safely died. please learn something from the truth teller.

I am disappointed that the pope died so fast. I expected a lot more against scums that ruined and tortured so many lives. This is the part where so many authors fails to deliver. Sadly, you are one of them.

plot armor! it's the legendary plot armor!

10 days later, then 8 days ago, then later, then ago.......then another timeline. it's not bad like confuses us readers, but it ruins the pacing. the momentum. it's more distracting than changing characters narrative too much.

soo, he didn't "buy" the light crystal recipe from his monthly allowance yet?

chocolate on empty stomach gives you a tummy ache.

ok, I admit this has stoked my high standards..... I am impressed

storm dragon veldora!