Jack_Sean

Great that I can read and enjoy the story with good writing and grammar. There are only 4 chapters with no recent updates, which leaves the book lacking.

Needs lots of improvements in the language and grammar. The broken sentences makes it hard to read

Here for the fast pass. This is a great story and waiting for more chapters to be released and with a higher frequency as well.

The Legendary Mechanic

Nice premise but too few chapters available. The chapter release rate is a little slow for my liking. Might want to improve the release rate if you want to get a bigger and consistent following.

The story is not bad but there are so few chapters and it's release rate is too slow for me. I like to binge read and can finish an average of 50 chapters per day. So I will probably wait until it is either completed or at least have 300+ chapters available before fully investing into the story.

LZ: And this kids, is how I met your mother

How did agility become the lowest stat when he was focusing on strength and agility from the start?

What a great chapter! And what a fitting title. The chapter name is so fitting. It was such a low blow to Regus on what happened to his son and to us readers to leave us at such a cliffhanger

it will only be funny if one of the 200 brands owned by coca cola is pepsi