PiousLight

There's really nothing epic about "come forth and serve". It doesn't give me goosebumps like Jinwoo did with his famous "ARISE" for fuck's sake! Now that's epicness! (Translator google)

Es una historia bastante entretenida, el concepto en si es bueno y el sistema implementa es interesante para una historia de One Piece, un Coby pirata le da una perspectiva a la historia que tenerlo como un Marine que llevaría a su proclamación a Luffy que “no dejaría que cumpliera su sueño”, ¡esa pequeña mierda hiso que mataran a Garp! (Hasta el día de esta reseña creo que así ha sido) y tiene el descaro de decir eso, *suspirar* típico perro del Gobierno Mundial, Solo espero que este Coby no sea igual o piense demasiado con su pene para el caso. También se agradecería que no se utilizara tanto la I.A. o por lo menos tratar de cambiar las palabras o dejar de exagerar en algunos aspectos, es bastante obio para alguien que uso la I.A. para terminar su tesis jeje. De ahí en mas es bastante entretenido no para pagar el Pa/treon pero si entretenido para pasar el tiempo, gracias por la historia autor.

Seriously author friend, what the fuck? He's already reading the part where he was leaving with Kuina and Sabo, but they came across a scene that made the MC's blood run cold and you go out and remove all the chapters, you should have started another book or warned me, I just came across this book today and wanted to finish it where you left off *sigh*. Well the damage is done, so I'll ask: Now that you are going to rewrite it are you going to add Uta when Shanks first arrives Dawn Island? To end it's a good story, I didn't agree on many of the MC's decisions but it was entertaining, thanks for that author.

!jajaja si era esa historia! Autor, si vas a monetizar por esta historia ¡por lo menos trabaja más en los capitulo por favor! Necesitas trabajar más al momento de diferenciar cuando un personaje estaba hablando es bastante incomodo cuando no sabes si un personaje habla o está realizando alguna acción (Creo que alguien más lo había notado y lo reseño, estoy totalmente de acuerdo con ese tipo), puedes usar la siempre confiable "comillas dobles" o dividirlo entre (paréntesis) hace que tu trabajo se vea más estético.

Let's start with the fact that it is a fanfic from the page spiritfanfiction with the name "Pinte o Mundo de Laranja" or translated "Pinta el Mundo de Naranja" by Da3va, the truth when I first started reading this story tickled my memory until today's chapter where Naruto makes a comment to the name of the fanfic and I remembered that I had already seen it. The truth is that I loved it when I saw it two years ago, I always found it sad that the author didn't continue with the story, since it had a lot of potential and it was the time when I was quite obsessed with Naruto's theme in other worlds. I don't know, in my opinion the author should give credit to that original author of the story if you are using his work and if you plan to continue with it since you are profiting from it, besides splitting original chapters to charge more or however the dreaded P. page works since the original work ended with only 28 chapters. My recommendation, identify and highlight when a character is talking as there are times when it is too confusing because if you are going to continue with the author's story that would make it more comfortable to read. I will change the rating if the author continues with original material.

but a nephilim can also be like Death from Darksiders.