I like music, computers, swimming and fantasy books. Every wednesday and Sunday I publish a chapter of my novel :"the life-story of a cactus"
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I'll go on a long shoot and say he was trying to say : Previously while staying at the longbottom manor , I used the excuse of sending gifts to leave.
Maybe antagonist (someone that has to fightthe hero) and not a villain
While I agree, this Mc is still dumb for not choosing passives, he could impress a lot more people of he managed to use this passive and show off his. "Talent"
Mine was throne of magic arcana . Honestly the start was absolute shit, but once the magic academy arc starts the story was like kryptonite to me, just Irresistible for some reason.
Yeah I agree with that one comment , make it somewhere else for. 7 years, do some chapters per year ( or more if u want to develop something, specially character relationships and power progress, maybe more time in the first years and last? Idk u do u, I trust your judgment) and then u come back, that way the tension and suspence won't be lost, yet you'd still have a good story development
Magic archer would go wild with this guy. His first weapon was a gun so he already has the basic aim, he is physical fit and the way he uses magic allways felt less wizard in robes and more magic rogue to me so I can't imagine him willingly staying put in Ionia for 7 years studying. So maybe a more untraditional magic education would fit him best, being forced to strive in here, for those years while learning magic more geared towards practical areas. U know the whole regual education VS Vocational school
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It's being interfered with