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From the talk, I had with him a couple of chapters back, what I got from the story, and some other comments I have seen him answer I don't think there will be a harem, at most it gonna be 2, and even then I do think he will do a good job regardless of which one we get, unless he goes crazy and decide to go full pokemon harem them I take back what I said

I cannot agree more, this one here is way prettier, the guard of the other one is what mostly kills it for me

Can they summon a servant outside of the war, or only the people participating in and at the time of the war?

I am a little disappointed that is not some random dude who tried to stop her, but still good

The more I read the more I like this, most stories would have let her finish her monolog and even escape in some cases

That is true, and I believe coffee is like beer, where most people who drink it don't actually like the taste, especially beer.

While I think I am good at identifying "problems" with stories, I don't think I am a good writer, but I can have a look at their Wiki page this weekend and see if I can send anything if you are interested, but I highly doubt it will help, because as I say I suck at writing stories especially dialogs, It's the biggest reason I have never written a FF myself, at most I can try pointing you in a direction so you can have more options

I think the worst thing about a harem, in my opinion, is that every woman in the relationship tends to accept everything very easily, regardless of their personality, or ideals, and the relationship tends to have no build-up. Now while I think your building of their relationship is going very well, they still need to get closer in a more personal way, not only the MC with the girls individually, but also the girl between themself, as I don't think any relationship regardless of how many people are in it, works romantically, unless all of the participants at least like each other, it's either that or they love one of them so much that they accept the other one(but I don't think either of them can get into that second category in a short amount of time), because right now, even if the MC and any of the girls has sex, I think it's going to be more related to fun than anything else (even if I do think they see him at least as a friend), as they are 2 very old ladies that have seen and experienced a lot in life, and they have very strong personalities, to just bow down and accept something like a 3-way relationship. Lastly, I may be wrong but I do think the dreams the MC is having about Morgan's past is the "ticket" to bringing them closer to one another, at least I think that can be used for that, as for the MC with Altrouge and her with Morgan I don't know enough about the character or the lore to give any idea to try and help. PS: Sorry if anything may have sounded rude or anything of the like, I am not very good at expressing emotion in long texts(sometimes even in short ones) even in my mother language much less in one I am still not that proficient.

I am really liking it, I tried reading some fate ff before but they never got me invested like this one, and if I am being honest I was not going to start reading this one as well, what made me change my mind was a comment you made about harem when someone asked if this was going to have one, and I have to say I loved the answer so much that it made me want to have a look at the story, and I am happy I did.

Ok, thanks, that makes more sense now, I don't mind when things are not "how it's supposed to be" as long as they have a good explanation in the story (like here) It just bothers me when they use the wrong one just for the sake of it, that also applies to any inconsistency (some botters me more other less), there was even a story I was reading once where I stopped because the MC that was a lord(don't remember his rank, but it was fairly high at the time) let a peasant sit at the head of the table (in a medieval setting) as if it was nothing and that keep happening a lot. PS: The story was not that good, that was just the straw that broke the camel's back.