Guy_Slade

The start was excellent. The characters flushed out and interesting. However, the story has taken a huge dip in story quality since the dimensional game travellers from the far East appeared. It has declined to the point that I decided to drop the story once the MC started sending the other students to different planets in his flying tower. (sounds like a fever dream). It's a classic case of self sabotage, unfortunately, trying to turn a story into a multiversal one when the end of the story is approaching. Probably to try and stretch it out.

Well if there is anyone who deserve to become Servitors, then it is scavs.

This is a pretty sloppy chapter.

God, this is really dragging on. The mc has spent several chapters doing the same thing over and over again.

You make valid points. Generally, my concern stems from when it gets taken too far.

While I am glad for the change. I do believe in letting an author tell their tale, without being held hostage to the whims of the reader, as we are a fickle minded bunch, and you could never please all of us all of the time. If you do your best and are happy with what you had put out, that is all that matters.

guess I will stop reading here and come back when fixer

excellent.

I am hoping he grows out of it. But your probably right.

I hope this isn't going to be a harem ff.