Ttalker26

Since at the start the inspiration came from another novel, I put 4 stars on world background. Other than that, this was a very good read. I've reached volume 3 in 2 days, and I wanna slow it down a bit lest I catch up. Definitely recommend this for everybody.

It's a good read, I hope that you don't abandon it. Writing quality is good, its consistent throughout the series. I like how you progress the story. I would recommend Murkrow in addition to being a scout as well as a good attacker. In addition to it being dark type for gym battles, it would help a lot because you can attach a camera and view it from the sky for aerial view. With misdreavus spying inside and murkrow outside with natural black caumoflage. I think the characteristic where he got plus attack for every opponent he faints is a plus.

Not Bad. Solid read, but could have paced it out a bit more for some extra slice of life. Not that it affects the story much. I just liked the parts where he was relaxing with his family.

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The story development and character design is trash. In story development, there is no foreshadowing whatsoever. The synopsis is also misleading cause you'll think he will hatch a snake and evolve it afterwards right? WRONG!! He got the twin headed snake from the very beginning. The character design is also bad. There is also no foreshadowing when he introduces character. Plus the logic is all messed up. You will think that a beast egg from a wasp will turn into a wasp right? WRONG AGAIN! Its random. However this is still acceptable, but what about the lack of risks? When he hatched two more divine beast eggs you'll think there's some sort of risk like imploding right? WRONG AGAIN! No risk mentioned whatsoever. The goldfinger is also very vauge. The functions should have been mentioned earlier on. The background information of MC should also be mentioned earlier on. I still don't know how he got to this world. The MCs goldfinger has very good potential if executed and written properly, but sadly its bad. Its okay to read I guess but not a quality read. Overall good idea, but trashy execution.

I've read the mtl of it and I suggest you only read up to 150 chapters of it. He rapes a girl in around ch 160 and this novel is pretty bad in itself. Like chinanumbawan thing. This had good potential because of how unique the MC's golden finger is, but incompetent author ruined it. I suggest you not to read after arpund 100 chapter brcause that's where almost all chinanumbawan thingy is going on. Don't read this garbage. NEVER. Incompetent author wasting such a good novel.

Noice. More chapters like ch 70 and 41. They are hot af. This is Fire and pls upafte faster. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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One of the reason why in most harem novels you will see beauties pursuing the MC instead of the other way around is because it is very difficult to make a situation where pursuing another women, even though you are already in a relationship, justifiable. Because it will be like betraying the Female Lead's love for the MC. Some authors wrote in such a way that the Female lead doesn't mind, but I actually kind of think its quite forced, because in many situations the Femaled lead doesn't know about the MC's other love interests. I think forcing it will make some readers think that there are some hidden problems in the relationship wven though in most cases there wasn't a single chapter addressing that hidden problems. That is unless ofc there is one and that is how the author intended it to be. Like the FM betraying the MC. Kind of a good plot twist if I say so myself. The problem though is in most cases you won't see this(atleast I haven't).

A very unique novel. The way he progresses the novel is very unique but also very disturbing. All imma say is to be prepared. Even though updating speed is a bit lower than I like, It is still reasonable cause it's an original novel. World Background is also nice. Not exposing much of the world situation before he gets there. Character designing is also nice but you should work on the development abot more. Try not to make it a bit rushed. I don't wanna spoil but you'll understand if you read the novel. Lastly for the Author, good job and pls continue updating it.