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Ritter_Bruder18 hours ago回復 ILoveYouAllhe obviously acts as a Roman general where he only enters combat when absolutely necessary to win a battle or to avoid a disaster.
- Ritter_Bruder2 days ago回復 Dros_Sant
hello,thank you for your review,what I do is write in Spanish,normally I translate it into English,but sometimes because I am short of time I just throw it to a translator with ia,and it certainly takes a lot of liberties when it comes to changing words,but the whole story is handwritten in Spanish. about mc's personality and friends:well before he was a fearful antisocial who barely went out just to fulfill the orders of his father so it would be understandable that he has no friends,after his personality change he totally changed to a dominant personality,especially because he sees everyone as tools to consolidate his power,so getting real friendships and not fake for interest,is really difficult. The enemy that I have in mind are in addition to the broken structure of the empire are its external threats led by enemies with extensive knowledge.
- Ritter_Bruder5 days ago回復 Everardo_Reyes
likewise, konrad will soon abandon his name and take the name caesar and well we will have, the caesar's legion.
- Ritter_Bruder5 days ago回復 Everardo_Reyes
Historically speaking, mercenary bands usually referred to themselves as "The Great Company." Where do they originate from, or what cultural group comprises them
- Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 Coldman
Salads, bread with salt and oil, but also a way to remove dirt from the body, like the Romans.
該書已被刪除。 - Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 Mattex97
As I understand it, when ned took his sister's body to king's landing, he and Robert became friends again.
該書已被刪除。 - Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 anubis1650
do you know how to avoid deleting the comments of the paragraphs?, I realized that they disappear when I make the changes that you recommend me.
該書已被刪除。 - Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 Coldman
olive oil, dorne, because of its climate, grows most of the olive trees of the 7 kingdoms.
該書已被刪除。 - Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 OromisEldaGlaedr
Yes I sometimes think the same, but here I have 2 dilemmas, if I fast forward 10-12 years to give more of consistency of Robb's actions, I will have 2-3 years to do a lot of things to prepare for the clash of kings and the progress will not seem real, the other is to explain how a 1 year old who looks like a 3 year old has so much knowledge about ruling,the truth I would rather explain the child thing than to explain how 2-3 years robb changed the north so much as to affect the outcome of the red wedding.
該書已被刪除。 - Ritter_Bruder2 years ago回復 Echi_Tachi
I plan to do a chapter on this subject, to explain how certain groups see Robb (peasants, merchants, guards, family, etc.),
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