Manmaman

THE ROOT

The writing mode is interesting I have already read another icaro fanfic in fate luckily and great work by the writer-san they don't look alike I am intrigued by the magic that the protagonist can develop considering the legend of icaro and the lore of fate I am excited hehe

for the ben 10 fanfic more than an mc who reincarnates in ben 10 or kevin, which is very worn, zero that it would be much better to create a story more around the lore for example: the knights. the whole magical side of the universe THE SAME MADAFAKA UNIVERSE hehehee well that's why I'm hooked on this fic 👌👌

Mmmmm quiero poner una groseria pero seré educado y pediré por favor otro capitulo

the mc is entertaining to read and the characters have personality mc's "hack" is useful and is not op, at least for now, the writing quality is of good quality even translating it with google-cha horario de actualizaciones razonable 😘😘

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I think that considering that Orochimaru is his sensei and that he has a great talent for medical ninjutsu, Yomi's dark medical ninjutsu techniques from the country of demons would be useful to him.

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That is because at least as far as I was able to interpret in Naruto, the shinobi clans were clans because you had a characteristic technique or element. The only clan in which this is not seen is in the Sarutobi clan. Anyway, the story is still interesting. ps: until now and considering the talent of the protagonist, I think he should dabble in illusions

caught my attention until now the protagonist is not a son of heaven or anything like that, he has things in which he stands out and others in which he does not, which I see as logical and makes me curious as to how the story will develop I also want to see what is special about your clan and what it can offer you in addition to its elemental affinities. there are a lot of them that are never used