leo26

Its not short but calling a seven hour drive inhuman is too much .

Yeah i am planning to re-read once i have some time

What do you mean normal humas? Are brown people not normal

Honestly no need for other templates, its just redundent when only with ulqiora he can be the strongest so i would recommend not adding anymore templates.

What???

Bro please for the love of God put announcement like these with the chapters and not as separate releases.

Yeah i agree, It has got to the point that it has killed my intrest in a story when it is used

Is this knb or Dragon ball z.

+1

Will be completly honest, did not like this as the first chapter of the novel. I always think that showing the future on the first chapter like this always takes out the experience since you are basically spoiling your own novel, and another reason is that most probably the novel will be dropped way before reaching that point and hence it feels like a teaser to a movie which will never drop. Complely reductant in my point of view