Daoofmilk

This fanfic is honestly really solid in a lot of aspects, and I would really recommend it to anyone that wants an entertaining read for a while. Now to the bad things its got some repeated paragraphs in some chapters that can throw you for a loop until you realize you're reading the same thing over again and that its been repeated for whatever reason. As for the characters themselves well I didn't let some things bother because i thought we would see them resolved later in the story but it feels like the MC doesn't have a "Core" personality as in he keeps doing things I don't expect but that might just be a skill issue as a reader. I really would love to see how his relation with his first mentor is resolved because i really liked it but maybe i've been poisoned by the plethora of bad fanfics i've overfed my brain with. ANYWAY ill stop my ranting. Solid fanfic, would recommend

there is a spider man villain that is a very good hunter

guy failed middle school

Breaking their ribs or getting injured while lying down for long periods probably isn't an issue and pokemon should be smart enough to know that the town is a much safer place than the wilds so they don't need to be ready to run by sleeping up.

this just gave a whole new meaning to Skyrim lore lmao

"What nobility? oh you those corpses on the ground hahaha"

You're uninformed and talking about this like your a professional, 1st of all they are brothers not rival males therefore he doesn't HAVE to or WILL kill his own brothers children, 2nd of all there have been a number of prides with multiple males.

Wouldn't they know what they were if they've looked at their status screens even once? Unless you mean in the sense that they don't know exactly what it means to be lupines of remus

that was on purrpose right?

he's a professional corpse