Count_Daath

I think it would be cool. I don't know how you've set up that universe though. I think it would be a good idea to pull from the three main animated series of Justice League, Teen Titans, and Young Justice. Maybe even pull from the Legion of Superheroes since I've never actually seen a fanfic use that franchise.

if you want to do the party system don't make it look like Xavier"s system. Make this ability be like a blessing, that allows Xavier to increase the potential of his party. Miguel for example, if Xavier blesses him his rank increases, but he has to work for it. The blessing works with the principal of excavating extra potentail.

Yes, yes it was.

+1

+1

I have been noticing a worrying trend on Webnovel recently that authors having their main characters reincarnated in younger bodies, but not addressing what that means for the MC's psychology. Which leads to what I call the ped0 problem of MCs being attracted to minors when they are mentally adults. This fic for example has the MC who I'd assume was at least in his mid twenties thirsting for a damn pre-teen. To me this is behavior you should never condone, because if you do you become part of the problem of people slowing either unintentionally or intentionally making ped0philia normal in the eyes of consumers. if it wasn't for this fact I'd Rank this fanfic pretty well, because its grammar and pacing is above average (8.5/10).

I'm happy you seem to be in good condition.

yes

nah get dawn

The writing quality is okay and thats all ot has going for it really, but I can't continue reading this story. The MC is a pedo, he's creeping on a child as a full grown adult, so what if he's in a child's body, it still doesn't make it right. I could have been okay with it if the overly apparent crush came along latter and not when there still in middle school. I repeat again, this is a FULL GROWN ADULT. creeping on a CHILD.