DamnItJessy

Quite lewd, characters personality is made to be a pervert could have been done differently, while keeping those character interactions. With the 100x increased rewards character and village progression is broken to hard to maintain logically. There needs to be a restriction with copying skills or else why not copy every single skill. No skill is useless with 100x increase in points and no restrictions on upgrading them, leaves no suspense. Upgrading skills needs a limit as well. Having a village as an enemy is a good idea, but with 100x increase if it wasn’t for the population he’d instantly become a city. Would have been good without 100x increase and instead give him a luck halo or another way to gain and then transfer skills to his followers. The main character needs losses there needs to be worry from us, that he’s gonna get his butt kicked, items stolen, loose fights etc, other wise you can already imagine how the story will turn out. Over all the idea is there needs more though into the power system for sure. Could have given him 1 op skill and then slowly gained the rest even gaining 100x in the future shocking all other territory leaders at his fast improvements, which I’m sure you will but we don’t have a sense on how hard the grind actually is.

Extreme nationalism, it’s just shoved down your throat not even a hundred chapters in and it’s in countable nationalism try’s to say china is superior in every way even making very illogical comments but if there was no nationalism and this was just a random technological world with no relation to earth I’d give it 5 stars which makes it so disappointing

looking for mtl not enough chapters to even know if you like it or not

it's exactly why

I forgot his plot Armour is fully maxed and he has admin controls to change the values of plot Armour to an absurd level he has never taken a single loss ever how are you supposed to have growth or feel for the character and its the same antagonist plot. random npc will think your stupid and weak even if it's blatant your strong the insult your 9 generations for absolutely no reason besides antagonist mc proceeds to destroy antagonist rinse repeat literally hundreds of times. also he has tried face slaping and he just makes the antagonist literally as dumb as a rock and it will be a leader in a high level position commanding countless beings and there as dumb as a bag of rocks literally like what's wrong with the author ????

where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes

no idea what is happening

Author deff in tally forgot the moon empress fey even said I will be watching him carefully when ever he is in the marsh world

author must have forgotten about shadow....

but if universe is stuck in Marsh world then the Marsh world will have to be combined with main world probably around time of the competition in a year