Sloth_Incarnate
I just like to make stories that make me feel good and proud about what I write.
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Sloth_Incarnatean hour ago發表Can we get an interlude about what some of the other villages look like? Maybe even a non lord play. It’ll be nice to see some more different perspectives in the world.
- Sloth_Incarnate3 days ago發表
Boooooooooooo. What’s the point
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago回復 Sloth_Incarnate
What does that change about my dislike of cannons?
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
A cool idea that falls flat due to poor unrealistic (even by fantasy standards) choices. Why is a 9 year old fighting in a war, and holding his like a grown man? Why is a man who lost his leg still able to sword fight mid battle? How is the gold company stronger, when his mercenary grip has 2X their numbers? Just silly not well thought out stuff. The grammar is decent enough and the idea is cool tho.
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
This is either Ai or a translation, cuz ‘leg’ is definitely meant to be ‘arm’.
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
The gold company has less than half their me? It’s not even a competition
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
How is a 9 year old fighting grown men? 10 out of 10 times even the weakest adult fighter would k*** him easily, no matter how ‘prodigal’ he was
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
How could he lose a leg and still fight? He would be dead from the blood loss alone without any aid
- Sloth_Incarnatea month ago發表
How is Monford the Lord of Driftmark if he is in Essos? Or does he just come back to Volantis a lot? Did he kneel?
- Sloth_Incarnate2 months ago發表
That doesn’t really make much sense, since ASOIAF dragons like living near volcanoes and sulfurous places.
