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Franco_Vicente

Franco_Vicente

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  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicentea year ago
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    It's good, I liked it. Raw? Raw? Raw? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente2 years ago
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    It's good, it's not like those novels that seek to take advantage of having characters like succubi to make R18 chapters non-stop and forget about the development of the plot. Also, although at first the story doesn't seem to have much originality, as the chapters go by, it gradually becomes detached from being just a generic isekai with futuristic weapons.

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente2 years ago
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    Thanks for the chapter.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I would like to take this opportunity to say a couple of things that I was thinking while reading this chapter: it seems to me that the number of people in Minecraft should be higher if you say that it is the routine of people from all over the world; and although it doesn't matter to me, I think it would have been better for mc to sell fortnite instead of making it free, since he has no one to compete with him in the entire gaming industry

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente2 years ago
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    Hello bro[img=update][img=update], the novel is good[img=recommend][img=recommend], is it a translated Chinese novel? If so, can you give me the original name?

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente2 years ago
    回復 SurprisedPikachu1

    I agree with most of what you say. But if there's more plundering and reactions than it is so far, then it may lose focus on the MC's personal life and a lot of his interactions with other characters, which is something I really like. I think that without a well-polished MC, novels of this type end up becoming monotonous. By the way, I am in favor of including information on different topics to get into context, but sometimes it ends up being super extensive jajjaj

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente3 years ago
    回復 OLB

    It is good to see that the authors play with the originality of the crossovers to try to innovate and it is always fun to see how the different verses are connected in the same world

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente3 years ago
    回復 FAP_Master_

    fellow daoist, it seems to me that you have the wrong sect

  • Franco_Vicente
    Franco_Vicente3 years ago
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    Very good fanfic, I love the analysis that the protagonist performs from a particularly sinic point of view to the world of dxd. The only thing that doesn't convince me is the way Nathalla acts (considering that she is based on her version of the mcu), but maybe it's just because of my interpretation of her personality, it's good to see the characters from time to time from different perspectives so I'm not going to detract from this story for that. A well deserved 5 stars, thank you for writing good stories sir great author, I wish you the best. PS: Don't listen to the comments that say this crossover doesn't make sense, a fanfic doesn't need to be perfect to be good.[img=recommend] PSS: Although as I already said Natasha is not as I imagined her, in the last chapters I really liked how you developed her character.