Ahtu_Flagg

He did say "soon after", it's technically correct.

fate*

This is slowly becoming a narcissistic boast-fest... Why? The story was doing fine before, this was kept to a minimum. But suddenly there's a deluge of BS like this in the chapter?

I think you GREATLY overestimate the stock that the Great Lords of the Riverlands puts in the Frey's as vassals...

abduct* He absolutely took her away.

Many of them would switch their allegiance immediately just based on who sits on the throne, it's pointless. A waste of time and potential resources.

Really? I thought it improved markedly. It has yet to go into any "masterwork" territory, but it's absolutely worth a read a bit further in. Wish he'd fix some parts of it tho.

The part you were referencing wasn't tho? So how does that matter?

What you're suggesting is to stop Hagrid from retrieving the stone, and the MC laying claim to the vault. But this would result in Voldemort breaking in and successfully stealing the stone this time. Coming back way ahead of schedule.

When he shows this level of talent for transfiguration, you'd think of his father tho, no?