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To be honest, the pace of the story was strange, and why would the character leave without paying, just to impress a girl, Mey's reaction afterwards was very unnatural, i like your fictíons but this

where did so many susanoos come from?,I noticed a lot of use of AI but it's not bad, but again, where did so many susanoos come from and why didn't they control Kurama with mangekyo?

The focus of the story is interesting; I always thought a story with the main character being from the main Hyuga branch would be very good. But the heavy use of AI, the repeating terms and the constant focus of the story wanting to show that the protagonist is a genius leave the story monotonous and heavy. If you would refine this story and remove so many unnecessary terms and thoughts, I would love to read it.

This story is very good man, I liked the plot, the character, the skills, it would be good if more episodes were released John Rick is badass

Dude, you could make a great Bakugan novel, this story about half human and half Bakugan is boring, you have talent, you could make a Bakugan isekai that would be good, PS your character is too angry at some moments, that's exhausting, that's just my personal opinion

very good novel, the character is not too op, balanced and fun, I've always been a fan of taijutsu characters, I've always been upset with how they underestimate characters like Rock lee and Guy, too bad the author stopped

the story was very good, full of originality, I liked the way it presented the character and the imprinting with Malia gave it a nice touch, the course of the story so far was very good, I could feel each characteristic of each character in the story just like the series, very good battle against the alpha, the best teen wolf fanfction I've seen so far, keep it up, can't wait to read more, the kind of story that makes you hungry for more.