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Crazy amount of chaps author, ur a beast I wonder what the OFA sub quirks will transform into when practiced with heavenly restriction…
Now if I were to talk about all the great things about this fic, id be here a while, so instead, I’ll give my one criticism and hope that it helps the author improve their already good writing. The characters seem to sometimes blend into one another, the teasing, the jokes and quips all seem to stem from the authors personality and their characters have that “aspect” adopted into themselves, which makes it kinda… off at times. For example we see Izukus mom make jokes and quips that aren’t expected from her, a playfulness that hasn’t been seen, now that itself wouldn’t be too strange, maybe this Inko Midoriya is just more fun? But it becomes evident when this teasing, playful nature is exhibited by other characters in a significant way. This behaviour also extends to the authors other MHA fic limitless, the teasing quippy jokes making characters blend together can be seen there too. Other than that small critique, the fic is wonderful and I highly suggest you all give it a try.
Hawks? They could fly around together, he could replicate Hawks wings and feathers and learn some “pheonix-like” moves and attacks too!
Should’ve read the terms and conditions for the fic ig
You think the system told him that the girl was trying to challenge him to a death match as well? Lmaooo
This is a fantastic fic, I’ve never seen or read COTE but I’ve been able to keep up really well just with a few looks at the wiki, the “system” if you can call it that, doesn’t do much at all. It’s basically just the MC maneuvering around the school which I find really interesting. He has no prior knowledge about COTE so its extra nice for a newbie like me lol
Other students are not nearly as reliable in information as your homeroom teacher who directly wants you to improve, what a silly thing to call stupid lmao