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yizreel_jez

yizreel_jez

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17 year-old aspiring author!

2019-01-26 加入Philippines
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  • yizreel_jez
    yizreel_jez4 years ago
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    Nice, Nice!! I love the structure of how it was written, it was so poetic and lovely, it is as if I can feel the words that I am reading, It was vividly awesome that I could imagine and feel what the character is saying, it is like I am beside the M.C. listening to his wonderful story. Kudos to the Author😁😁 A very well written Novel and I look forward to the next chapters🙌

  • yizreel_jez
    yizreel_jez4 years ago
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    Good job author for a job well done😁. First off, the title is quite catchy and fascinating. Yes it is a captivating title which is a good start. The writing quality is quite profound and descriptive in somewhat ways, I love how you descriptively wrote this. The grammar is little to no error, and yes, to all who'll ever read this too, its quite understandable as well as enjoyable. The story, the plot is good, I am into this kind of genres, and author you did a good job expressing your love for writing with this book. The characters are also well-designed, which is great, and it makes the story have more life. Well lastly the synop**is, Its good, but to further captivate us readers, it must be more interesting. I look forward to further chapters author, a job well done💓😁