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Yup, he is indian.

Use some common sense. You are an Elite level tyrant. Do you really think Grimm monsters would leave you alone after they had taken so much trouble to seriously injure you? They will search the whole forest, if needed.

I am confused. Is it really possible? For example- I was there when Fang Yuan killed himself. His consciousness travelled to when he was fifteen years old. But what about me? Will the version where Fang Yuan killed himself no longer exists. If so, how is that possible?

If he wait till then, others would have already refined a gu and he would be left behind. And our mc has c grade talent which makes his refinement slow.

Really? How can one get up neatly?

The second point was already mentioned as they have taken down the shield or whatever it was called. And was waiting to see how far Michael can go. For, the first point, don't think it's required anymore.

That is a good point. But all of them are experienced and leader of their faction, so they might have resources which can nullify the effects of blood burning. And these old fogeys also want to see how far the MC can go.

I think so, but it's a life and death moment.

It's a fast paced story and I like it. The background of every character is well written. The world background is a believable one. Now, in my opinion, you should try different words for different characters dialogue. Like in 1st chapter I found different characters saying the the same words like okay, sure etc. You are writing it in the First person POV and it's a little confusing when, other than the main character's perspective is mentioned as I feel that you are transitioning very fast from character to character. Overall, it's a great read.

In the beginning, the description felt a little poetic and it was good. I have never seen a story open with such intriguing chapter. More chapters are needed to understand the story better, but from what I have read, this story has a very good potential. Don't put the translation in same volume, it distracts the readers and breaks the readers momentum. No one likes to get distracted while they are reading. Hope, you go forward with this story.