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Thanks to you dude , I start to think no one is reading my novel , because you can see you are the first one who comment here , if possible please tell your friends who are also interested in fantasy novels . if possible please comment your view about published chapters .

well, Raiza, you can check, I added details as you mentioned which are missing. I also request please if possible find time to read my other two novels" Will, The Crystal Soul's Energy" and "Otherworldly Warrior Farm Land" Especially "will ' the crystal soul's journey "which is my first novel try to read all published chapter.

by the way , I recommend my first novel . "Will, The crystal soul's journey " maybe you like

Thank you so much for the honest review. I am grateful 🥲 that at least someone pointed out my mistake. And yes, after you mentioned it, it seems like I forgot to describe Rudra Vilohit, so I will definitely add it in the future. As for which spell he uses, his parents know about his passion for magic. Whether he is embarrassed or not, I will keep it in mind to try to add some sort of detail that will not conflict with the story already published in the chapter. Once again, thanks a lot, dear. If possible, can you also point out my mistakes and give your honest review of my other two novels? And I hope my reply will motivate you to consider my request. 😂😂😂😂