Kazuto_Kirigaya69

Going past those archaic english is hard lol. Still, after the Flood, the characters finally talks normal so there's that.

As for now, it's quite good! Anticipating what would happen! And also the name of the MC!

Author back at it again! Although the last novel ended quite unexpectedly, seeing this, I understand. I have high hopes for this one, so please don't disappoint!

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Keep it up and learn more. The story is good, the world background is good, but the way you portray and narrate the story still needs improvement. Fix anything that needs to be fixed and keep updating steadily if you could.