Macharonni

Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, it’s blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesn’t need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isn’t the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and games… But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Can’t say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that don’t really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesn’t know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.

Honestly surprised how far I read before giving up. It had a pretty solid start and things were interesting up until Lilith showed up. Let me give you an example, Lilith takes hostage the MCs girls threatens him to comply, MC does it and gets angry, Lilith cries and says she’s doing it for him and asks why he thinks she’s evil. This basically happens at least 3 times within 10 chapters. I get it’s basically alluding that she’s probably one of his previous girls who reincarnated. But it’s just incredibly frustrating when the story just keeps repeating again and again. In my opinion the author is probably just prolonging the story and fishing for more money. The quality of the writing is definitely decent, but it’s a waste of time.

Tbh I think it would have been better to keep the flying thunder god jutsu. Since it can teleport other people and things, not just himself. It just doesn’t make sense why he’s being stopped by others when he can teleport or maybe I’m misreading something. Cause in my mind I’m picturing Minato and I can’t imagine him being blocked. Good chap though

Felt. Then again if you think about dragon king tannin, who was reincarnated as a devil, then it’s not unheard of. But I am tired of the whole replacing Issei trope, it’s kinda overused.

Definitely one of the best Pokémon fanfic I have read. It’s slow but it’s well written and has lots of world building. From chapters 1-300 it was really good, although I liked the timeskip, I didn’t like how there were random side characters being added every few chapters with barely any context. From about 300-600, it got incredibly monotonous. It was essential meet with friends and family, train, research, and repeat. I could probably summarize the entire plot of 300 chapters in one chapter with how long they are. While the current chapters of 600+ are starting to get more interesting and the plot is starting to pick up. If I had to say a con, it would probably be how rather than a story it’s more of a diary. In the sense that theres little emotion in the writing, with the writing narrating the MC actions and not showing much personal development. For example, during the time skip he meets a bunch of people and becomes friends with them, but theres barely anything about why he became friends with them other then their initial meeting, then all of sudden they all come to his birthday parties and various other events. I don’t know if it’s just me, but everything just seems way too distant. Like if they were to all die in a Pokémon tide I would honestly not even remember their names 10 chapters later; however I would probably be more upset if one of his thousand of magicarp died. But other than that, everything else is good 👍

Hmmm I think you should double check this chap. Pronouns keep getting switched up, honestly couldn’t tell you whose a girl or boy

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This fic is really good, probably one of the best Genshin fanfics I’ve read. Although there isn’t much action, it makes up for it with humor and character development. I hope that this isn’t dropped and you keep up the good work

It’s a good idea, which I’ve seen multiple times on this website. However, it’s definitely one of the more poorly written ones. There’s barely any character development. It’s supposed to be a villain system, but he technically hasn’t done anything villainous. Sure he changes the plot and messes around with Issei, but he’s basically a better version of Riser who’s an actual villain. Nothing villainous about beating up an ignorant perv or exposing Rias of being two faced. He’s basically just doing exactly what Issei does in the original. Things just seem so forced and I had to turn my brain off for almost all 100 chapters before I made this review. Tbh I think the author of this book just ripped off another author with this exact same concept but changed a few things, since I had some major déjà vu for the first 30 or so chapters. Definitely don’t recommend unless you just want to waste time.

He’s immortal but not all powerful. Him announcing his power is literally telling everyone not to kill him and instead the only way to deal with him is to immobilize him. I get that this is a fic, but it still gave me an ick when I read this chapter. Made is seem less “realistic” per se.