The_Facts

Deodorant is real, and you don't need chakra to apply it lol

I'll give 3 stars for trying, but I have to say, just start your book in chronological order. I don't know why authors think readers will be all, " Wow, look how cool the MC is, can't wait to read an entire year of his life to reach the point I want to continue!" Also, why do people want to call their wives baby? Pretty much any other word is better. Thus is just personal preference. Another point is the punctuation, you may think the speech arrows look cool, and I am used to them from translated Japanese fics, but you use the arrows and regular speech marks for the same sentence, then continue the speech with only a dash and no closing marks. 《Wow," Said the MC -I love you baby Doesn't look too nice does it?

Just need him to lose an arm now, because that's something fanfic authors want to happen sometimes lol

They put god's fist in there instead to fix it, so you are pretty close

It's alright to have your own opinion, I just feel that if I wanted my trashy Chinese translated novels to be like English novels, I'd just read on Amazon instead of webnovel.

Don't worry, at worst it will emphasise how the words appear, not make them different words

I agree partially, that is why I only gave 2.4 stars instead of one.

I personally think AI makes it more unreadable, not because it doesn't make sense, but because the AI doesn't translate faithfully. I don't know if it is an option the translator can choose, but I swear the AI translations have more drama and details compared to mtl or edited mtl, so I feel that AI translations are basically a robot's fanfic of a story or fanfic.

I'm a bot for writing a review calling the author out in relying on AI to make the story less readable than mtl? Ok man

It's tough as a fanfic reader these days, reading AI translated and 'upgraded' stories with their inconsistent character positioning and size from random italics and bolding leave your head feeling like you shook it in every direction. Give me xianxia slop any day of the week. At least I can enjoy something not pretending to be better than it is.