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I read your novel before you rewrote it and stopped because it was so fast-paced with technology, so I hope I don't make the same mistake. You have a technological advancement that I don't have, and people are ready for it. That was in 2004. The magic of technology is to improve on what's gone before and make something new. At a good pace. that make as feel the happines that mc have when he finish. by the way am gonna read the rewrite again because i realy love your write and story . good luck

Good chapter thank you bro

Com on man one chapter isn’t enough in two days at least one itch day

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I was watching for narito show him self and just lik that end of flashback and start another ark seriously you make me angry bro I like your fanfic so much and still you make me angry Waiting for another chapter

You just want to Ruined this good fanfic Seriously harem this is a serious story with a deep idea about meaning of life even with all bad thing that can happen to you and her you are just thinking about harem wow The most thing that i start hate about fanfic is harem I mean is all man or people who red a horny teen want just to have sex

Tnx for chapter waiting fo the next one

I don’t like harem because it’s destroy the strory if you don’t played well but as they say before it’s dxd so it’s ok but keep the harem small maybe 2 girls or 3 max i mean it’s hard to mak a lot of girls happy and stay with you it’s not fair for them to share same man with a lot of girl becaus he cannot make any one happy

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